Posted by: jslion | March 4, 2010

Day 28: Ascending


Our fingers touch, and hands entwine

The essence of our bodies intermixes

Our lips touch, our tongues explore

Our souls extend and wrap themselves

Around the burning fire of our passion

Our bodies touch and come together

Our souls begin to interweave and dance

And within my inner eye, I see

Our souls merging and expanding

And then a spark of divine fire

Smaller than a dancing ember

Hotter than the blazing sun

Melts and fuses us until

A third soul is created and we have

For a moment

Become like God



  1. This one made me smile – though you might want to change the second entwined to another word 🙂

    I loved the intenation in this (sorry not sure how to spell the word!)


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    excited to read additional of your own writing, enjoy your day 🙂

    • Thank you for the comment. I am working at adding to my collection.

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