Ascending
Our fingers touch, and hands entwine
The essence of our bodies intermixes
Our lips touch, our tongues explore
Our souls extend and wrap themselves
Around the burning fire of our passion
Our bodies touch and come together
Our souls begin to interweave and dance
And within my inner eye, I see
Our souls merging and expanding
And then a spark of divine fire
Smaller than a dancing ember
Hotter than the blazing sun
Melts and fuses us until
A third soul is created and we have
For a moment
Become like God
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This one made me smile – though you might want to change the second entwined to another word
I loved the intenation in this (sorry not sure how to spell the word!)
Saffy
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at 1:54 pm
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at 8:57 pm
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By: jslion on March 29, 2010
at 9:02 am